Warrior Princess

A word to the critics: I didn't write this for you; I wrote it for the person I'm speaking to in the poem. And he has it framed on his ...

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Oh my gosh, that was a beautiful poem. I can picture it in my mind, the boy smoking, the girl sitting alone on the pier. I know how it feels, ...

Wow, that was actually pretty good, pretty powerful. The poetry is simple but profound, and painfully emotional. Now I must say I have a couple of nitpicks. They are not ...

Yay i like this poem!! It is STORMY, lol. You know, i wrote a poem about a storm too. This is good, though i must admit i didn't completely understand ...

This is a good poem, expressive, contemplative, and a little painful too. The fact is, I can relate because in many ways, I am that girl in the dark-colored clothes, ...

NOOOOO!!! This poem made me sad. (technically it's really not that hard to make me sad, but whatever.) I know how that feels, when all the hopes and dreams come ...

Haha this poem was funny. I know because my brother talks like that all the time, albeit as a joke. Overall I can't say I really get the point of ...

Wow okay. This poem confused me just a tad, but oh well. It was poignant nevertheless, and gee, that person deserves a good whack in the head with his own ...

This was a good, beautiful poem, and I enjoyed it.

I feel you, sister! Everyone always tell me I look exactly like my mom and talk exactly like my dad, and it drives me insane. I don't want to be ...

This was, purely and simply, a beautiful poem. The imagery is at once rich, sensual, delicate, and evocative. I could see, hear, and feel everything you described. This poem proves ...

Oh my gosh. That was amazing. I have felt like the person in this poem only once in my life, and this is so much like that time that I ...

This was a beautiful poem, with amazing, sensual imagery. I must say I didn't prefer the "immortal portal" line--the words are cool but the rhyme sounds kind of cheesy--but overall ...

Whoa, okay....I'm afraid I didn't understand a word of that, but it was kind of cool nevertheless. I don't know, maybe you meant it to be kind of abstract? Anyway ...